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PostSubject: Atake, Moi - Kumogakure Genin   Tue Mar 29, 2011 8:32 pm

Name: Atake, Moi
Alias: Moi
Age:12
Gender:Male
Height:5'4
Weight:102

Appearance:A dark toned skin, with bright whitish hair. His eye's are Black/Brown with a slight glare. Atake, Moi is usually seen wearing a all black jumpsuit under a white vest and a white bladed katana strapped to his back. The features on his face are still mildly childish but puberty is noticable also. He has a small nose with thin lips. His face is soft and he has a sharp jawline.

Race:BlackBlack
Hair:White
Eyes:Black/Brown
Body:Lean
Ethnicity:Kumogakure no Sato

Personality:Atake, Moi is a very cautious person and likes to think things through before acting. He also has respect for people who stand by their word, even if they are the enemy. He is a very intelligent ninja. Nevertheless, he is capable of becoming dead-serious if thing seem out of hand.



Village:Kumogakure
Title:None
Special Titles:None
Missing Ninja Class:

    Karma:0
    Alignment:True, Neutral
    Renown:0

Rank:E
Experience Points:0
Bloodline:None
Element:Raiton/Lightning
Fighting Type/Style:Taijutsu
Sub Fighting style:Armed Taijutsu
Inventory:

    [*Full black jumpsuit/shoes]
    [*White vest]
    [*White bladed Katana]




Kekkai Genkai:N/A

Combat Styles:N/A

Bloodline Limits:

Jutsu Total:5
Jutsus:Bunshin no jutsu, Henge no jutsu,Kawarimi no Jutsu,Raiton: Kangekiha:The user generates a large amount of lightning in their hands, which can then be released into conductive materials to electrocute their foes. However, a lightning technique of equal power can neutralize it. ,Rope Escape Technique, Shunshin No Jutsu



Missions Completed:

  • D-Rank:
  • C-Rank:
  • B-Rank:
  • A-Rank:
  • S-Rank:
  • Total:


Background:Atake, Moi was born inside the village of Kumogakure. His father being a ninja of the rank of Chunnin before he retired to become a farmer. While growing up his father encourged him to become a ninja like he did and his father before him. Around the age of 10 Atake, Moi's mother was found dead on there farm they lived on. Atake, Moi was told she left them by his father so he does not know the truth about the matter. After Moi's mother passed Moi and his father seem to split apart from each other. Moi's father rarely talked to moi and began drinking daily. His father began using there savings to drink making them more poor and poor. Moi soon only had around two outfits they he washed daily. One for special occasions and one for his usual outfit. Around the age of 11 Moi began to study in the Kumogakure village acadamy. His father giving him most of the basic trainin already he passed easily. Now at the age of elven/11 Moi has become a genin and takes small missions to help with the bills and such. He trains daily with his sword to become better, and hopefully his strength to reach his mothers ears so she can return home.


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PostSubject: Re: Atake, Moi - Kumogakure Genin   Thu Mar 31, 2011 6:38 pm

Hey there, Welcome to NAS.

I'm the Admin around these parts, Canadian if you have any questions feel free to PM me.

Few things I noticed on the profile. Your Title, should be Genin. And for our jutsu list anything other than the basics needs its full definition, just to save time on everyone you come into contact with's life.

On a side note, if you take the text you write out of the bolds it looks much nicer, feel free to do so at your own discretion.

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PostSubject: Re: Atake, Moi - Kumogakure Genin   Fri Apr 01, 2011 1:15 pm

I have edited and fixed my mistakes thanks for taking the time to read my application. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Atake, Moi - Kumogakure Genin   Sun Apr 03, 2011 12:30 am

Sorry for not approving you right away! We just want everything to seem neat and tidy xP
There is one thing, take a look over an approved Shinobi with a Jutsu, you'll see what I mean by the layout for your techniques.

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PostSubject: Re: Atake, Moi - Kumogakure Genin   Sat Apr 23, 2011 11:29 am

Trashed for inactivity.

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