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PostSubject: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Mon Aug 02, 2010 8:42 pm

Name: Takeshi Uzukata
Alias: The Night Terror
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Height: 5'11"
Weight: 154 lbs

Appearance: Takeshi wears a very unique set of samurai armor. His armor is a sharp fusion of purples blacks and blues.
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Race: Japanese
Hair: Black
Eyes: Blue
Body: Slender
Ethnicity: Iwagakure no Kuni


Personality: By all means Takeshi is one sick puppy. He loves everything about combat. The worst part of fighting for him is having to kill his already tortured victim. He rarely goes for killing blows, instead moving towards lobbing off limbs with huge giant blade, or leaving large gashes just below the skin into the muscle and fat of his opponent. He hates having team mates and works alone all the time.



Village: Iwagakure no Kuni
Title: Genin
Special Titles:
Missing Ninja Class:

    Karma: 0
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Renown: 0

Rank: E
Experience Points: 0
Bloodline: Dark Release
Element: N/A
Fighting Type/Style:Taijutsu, Ninjutsu
Sub Fighting style:Armed Taijutsu
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Kekkai Genkai:

Dark Release
Requirements: Must Be Taken From A Previous User. Character Creation
Description: The Dark Release (冥遁, Meiton) jutsu are techniques that can be used to absorb, manipulate, and release chakra taken from an opponent. It seems that techniques of this element are channeled through a mark on the user's left hand. This mark resembles two squares, one overlapping the other vertically. Chakra is absorbed through the upper square, while it is released and manipulated through the lower.

Absorption can only hold one technique at a time before returning it. Absorption does not work on Kinjutsu and S-Rank Techniques (if it is attempted the mark on the users hand will surge and they will be left without this ability for 4 posts)

You can only absorb Jutsu a maximum of 1 rank above yourself.


Combat Styles:

Name: Blackheart Style
Requirements: Must have Dark Release.
Description: The Blackheart Style is a mixture of sword usage with Dark Release. It is extremely hard to master and extremely rare to find a user of the Blackheart Style.
Levels:



    Chamber One: Awakening - User must have killed someone using Name: Dark Release: Destroying Eye

    Chamber Two: Acceptance - User must have absorbed one person's chakra supply with Dark Release Absorbing Eye

    Chamber Three: Inner Peace - User must have became an S Rank

    Chamber Four: Passing - User Must know absorb thirty Chakra Supplies




Abilities:

    Chamber One: Awakening - User becomes 50% more agile (lasts five turns or when Chamber Two is unlocked)

    Chamber Two: Acceptance - User becomes 50% stronger (still agile, lasts five turns or when Chamber Three is unlocked)

    Chamber Three: Inner Peace - User no longer feels pain (still agile, still strong, lasts five turns or until Chamber Four is unlocked)

    Chamber Four: Passing - User is invincible (still agile, still strong, still feels no pain, lasts two turns, user passes away afterwards.)



Bloodline Limits: None

Jutsu Total: 0
Jutsus: None


Missions Completed:

  • D-Rank:0
  • C-Rank:0
  • B-Rank:0
  • A-Rank:0
  • S-Rank:0
  • Total:0


Background: Takeshi was born in Iwagakure no Kuni. His inability to work with others has kept him as a Genin while at the age of 21. He has lived most of his life slaughtering those that he can find with ease. His aspiration is to become the worlds the next Kazekage, the nation he has been obsessed with since he was young. He has become more open to partners as he knows the only way to do this is to work with others. Takeshi hates his family as they have always shunned him for his actions. He would have killed him had it not been against his countries laws. He vows to end them all one day. He sees no need for love and affection only fear and domination. His outlook on life came from his family telling him that he couldn't be with a young love of his who had passed away soon after due to a successful suicide attempt as she could not be with Takeshi. Takeshi hates everyone and feels as though the only person he could have ever loves has passed away, this only makes things much easier for him when he needs to end someones life as they are of a lower class than him. In his mind, with enough practice, he will become the ultimate combatant.



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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:04 pm

Sorry to say but there is no way this character will be approved, it goes against everything the NAS template and character creation stands for. The Land of Iron isn't a map listed nation therefore Samurai (Or Sword users hailing from there) cannot be accommodated. There was no template built for your character's origin and being such you would be unable to perform nin or genjutsu, mainly taijutsu and samurai release arts which cannot really have a spot, at least not yet in the Jutsu section, what samurai or to be better stated so this is not misinterpreted, ahem...What Land of Iron fighters do is not Ninjutsu or any ninja related things, they are a completely seperate nation only sharing similarity in chakra because of the ninja world concept.


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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:08 pm

Another thing, please change the warlord statement in your bio, your only a Genin so you really don't have the fame for such a title, your heritage may have it though..and since Land of Iron does not exist on the site, at least not yet, your unable to be considered genin, we would need to make a separate set of rules and templates for Land of Iron players if that be the case.


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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Mon Aug 02, 2010 10:54 pm

Exactly what she said. We don't have Iron County (at the moment), we don't have a samurai template (at the moment), and also, you need to be more specific with your fighting styles. Read "fighting styles" in the guide
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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Mon Aug 02, 2010 11:05 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Mon Aug 02, 2010 11:34 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Tue Aug 03, 2010 12:22 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Tue Aug 03, 2010 1:41 pm

Armored Taijutsu is not a style >.> Armed Taijutsu or Weapon Taijutsu are the options. Also, for your Dark release on the KG section, type out the entire KG, or rather just copy paste it. Last thing I saw, your Style pointes need to be expanded on, so seeing as how you have no bloodline, you get 4 points for main distribution, and a 5th for your sub style. So Im assuming you eather went Primary, Primary, sub, or Mastery, Secondary, sub. Whichever it is, please specify.
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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Wed Aug 04, 2010 9:21 am

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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Wed Aug 04, 2010 11:26 am

Please do not double and triple post anymore, ok?

Your combat style, was it already approved or did you just add it in here? That's the last thing and then this can be approved
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PostSubject: Re: Takeshi Uzukata - Iwagakure no Kuni   Wed Aug 04, 2010 6:47 pm

It was approved

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